Reviews for BlueGray Trepidation
Zions dreamer chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
I really liked the detachment and the complex intimacy with your "characters" the gentle light through the sorrow. The way that it holds an ordinary moment and paints it in the readers emotions really neat. But the only thing I would say is to use punctuation to create your pauses (which could be every effective in your poetry) thank for the review its nice to hear from you as you seen to be an old hand bye!
The great disappointment chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
I really liked this a lot. It was well-done and you captured the emotions very well. I especially liked:
"... I envy that
and my own absent lover
who battles his own demons
in the face of this blue-gray trepidation
without me."
Kinchi chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Completely sweet. I could literally see.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
Theirs a ring on her finger... there's
or keep his eyes away from the mans raised finger I do not know... man's
I liek it.. ncie description of their love and kinda an unexpected but awesome ending
Leonines Ishiko Fauxville chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
Though it tends to read like a narrative piece in certain stanzas (but then again, your poetry isn't confined to stanzas), this poem is very provoking, and you have a great voice. Your thoughts are expressed beautifully, and your poem itself has no need for subtlety or sophistication which many poets strive for. It's truly a unique style
Soviet chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
Intresting
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
Dear Juliet-strong emotions, raw and bare and yawning as if to swallow hole existence. -m-