Reviews for Innocence Lost
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
that was one long stanza! maybe break it up a tad? meh either way, great
miss.aishaj chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Wow Fiontari. Amazing. This poem really spoke to me because I've been through the same thing and I feel the same way. I love this, it's amazing and I'd like it if you wrote more like this. Excellent work, that's all I can say, wow. Much Luv, Suicidal_Greeting
P.S. Could you review some of my work please? "No more miss perfect" sounds like something you might enjoy if you write like this. Check it out and review! Thanks.
Binggy chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
Excellent work. Very poignant, I liked the imagery but perhaps you should try to make it shorter...after a while it loses a bit of the sophistication and resembles angsty ranting..k don't mind me.
wonderful poem, nevertheless. One that's definitely worth reading again. :)