Reviews for Crushed
emilyrachel18 chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
I think after reading this poem i understand a lil bit more about you and babes i'm so sorry i didn't see it before, the poem itself is so heart felt i can feel every word said really alex as soon as i get my phone back i'm gonna call you ok?
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
i love the repeated rhyme, it really goes to show how people say this over and over to themsleves to convince themseleves that it wont happen again, but it always does, great poem, shows not only the physical pain but the emotinal thoughts too x weasel within x
eyeconqueror chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
thanks for ur reviews , i like this poem i like the way it rhymes , great job keep it on
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
Beautifully written, its usually a hard subject to write but you have done it wonderfully. It has a flow about it, and the images I get from the poem seem real.

Keep it up.
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
This is great need I say more, you are really a great writer, you've got an absolutely brilliant flow into this poem and it really paints the picture, Keep it up, great stuff
Keith Andrew
Geeksneedlovin2 chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
A beautiful different view of domestic violence. Even though it's a harsh subject, you tackle it with eloquence.