Reviews for The Real You
myno chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
beautiful. I can completely relate. I love the format as well. One comment: the wording in the last line is a little odd, i'm not sure whether you intended to put the word "the" in... THanks for all of you're reviews, I really appreciate them!
Mourning For Death chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
all i can say it's rly cool...i can be strong for the both of us...i like how u describe yourself to the "boyfriend" and how you're the same...
haha somehow im an angry pacifist...i used to have anger problems but i wanted to make them i did, now im a "pacifist" but an angry one lol...
Adirmes chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
I like this, it's just hard to read because of lack of punctuation. Well done though.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
wow. all mumbled together :S ah but nice piece!