Reviews for I own myself
Jasion Drake chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Very in your face, abrupt, powerful, to the point. Insofar as the flow goes, I think that to maximise the effect shorter sentences work best. The line "I'm not addicted to you anymore" breaks the flow somewhat.

It served the purpose you intended admirably, though.
Mourning For Death chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
i like's good...short to the point...and i like the way u express everything...rly good..
Jo The Pirate chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
I love the confidence that radiates from this poem. No faltering, no messing around with useless excuses, just the facts. Great job, gorgeous. Keep writing!
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
I totally agree.
Impressionist chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
nicely done
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
power to you. i love this. LOVE! go gurl! muah!