|Reviews for I own myself|
| Jasion Drake chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Very in your face, abrupt, powerful, to the point. Insofar as the flow goes, I think that to maximise the effect shorter sentences work best. The line "I'm not addicted to you anymore" breaks the flow somewhat.
It served the purpose you intended admirably, though.
| Mourning For Death chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
i like it...it's good...short to the point...and i like the way u express everything...rly good..
| Jo The Pirate chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
I love the confidence that radiates from this poem. No faltering, no messing around with useless excuses, just the facts. Great job, gorgeous. Keep writing!
| Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
I totally agree.
| Impressionist chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
power to you. i love this. LOVE! go gurl! muah!