Reviews for Target of the Matchmakers old |
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![]() ![]() ![]() To put it simply, I loved it. I especially loved how everyone was in on the plan, I thought that was sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was fun to read and it made my insides do flips. Although I thought the ending was slightly abrupt, it is nevertheless an enjoyable piece of writing. Thank you for your efforts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its really lame that they ALL want to set them up. DID EVRyone have to meddle? |
![]() ![]() This was a great story when I started out with it but it doesnt feel like it was the real ending. Mabe sort of just wimped out in the end and nothing even happened. |
![]() ![]() Hey, congratulations for your nomination on the story site (cant remember the name)I loved the Jerrod character but i think the end its just too corny, i mean i love romance and all sweet thing but you just kind of made Mabe a whimp in the end, well i still hope to read whatever you do next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! This is my second time reading, and I still think it's absolutely adorable! And thirteen matchmakers for them...it has to be obvious they go together. It's just a really really cute story! *CLAPS* |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha i was reading this, and i just wanted to note that, mabe's parents have an extraodinary sex life hahah xx bubble |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked your story. GOod job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() They got together! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everyone's so concerned about Mabe! It's really adorable, actually... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that last part, about how the punching bag attacked her. Hahaha, creative. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jer seems like an idiot to me, I'm not sure why though.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this first chapter. Can't wait to read more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really want to read your story, it sounds really interesting. But I want to wait for you to be done revising/ rewriting it so I hope you finish soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() VERY GOOD STORY. |