i love this one it is so beautiful and i loved it so much! well duh i love all your poetry! well i gtg ( i love jerusha too...it's like violet and claire roo is claire i can be vile adn you can be violet) but the poem was brilliant and i loved it!

oh my... that was so beautiful. it was innocent in this tragic sort of way... oh god i loved this. i don't know what else to say... i lve this.

this is so awesom ei love it! i love roo too wow htat is reall cool! and i love this poem it is so good! as always jessi

ANOTHER FRANCESCA LIA BLOCK FAN! whoot! haha great great work here! SMASHING JOB.

this was so beautiful- poignant, too, although I can't help but feel like an idiot typing that word. :) It was just really good- your writing's godly.

i love this it is so pretty and beautiful! it is awesome, like DUH as if anything you write could be anything but AWESOME! sincerely the other jess

This is very powerful and beautiful. The part, "i'm the little girl from the south"...wow...

Your work always leaves me awestruck. At certain points, I'll think, "I'm actualy improving. I can write." But then I'll read something like this and you throw my entire theory out the window. I'm not sad though. I"m glad that words can express these things, even if I'm unable to do so.

i'm going to review this stanza by stanza, sorry it took me a couple hours to review, but i had to get my thoughts back together so they didn't come out one massive blob of ! anyways. back to the reviews
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(1st stanza) brilliant. so beautiful it makes me want to cry but tears are hard for me sometimes. and you're in my head to! Carved onto my soul and i love you *so* much! Tori Amos :: Sigh :: Kurt Cobain :: sigh :: crushed satin. beautiful. "whispering secrets in words crafted from faerie wings" My god Jessica, your the most beautiful brillant person i've ever met! where did you come from? (twisted around Flint's words from Violet and Claire because they're the only way i can desrcibe how i'm feeling when i'm reading this)
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(2nd stanza) overflowed with lipstick stained cigarettes. beautiful indescribeable. candyland :: wants to cry :: i love how you said it was draw with our blood stained razorblades, that was so beautiful, perfect. heart shaped ashtrays, butterflies pressed between glass. amazing how such few words that you write can mean the world to me and make me want to scream, cry, dance, sing, spin, and collaspe at the same time.
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(3rd Stanza) in my eyes, you've never be fucked up. perfect in every way. i love the way you desribe yourself. i can feel my ribs sometimes too. sometimes i feel like i need to lose weight because it's the only way i can find more faeries. sometimes, i want to press fingers down my throat. sometimes, i do. but i love how we can still love each other besides our mistakes, and look pass it. because your so beautiful and amazing brilliant and i love you even more for your faults.
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(4th Stanza) like i said about. scars and bones don't matter. your a beautiful person, and they don't bother me because it's YOU i love and adore and cherish and created Candyland with. you ARE beautiful in every sense! :: blush :: you make me feel so specail and loved and stuff. you, too, are so much more than anyone else could ever be! I love the way you word yourseld, perfection in a test tube genie bottle.
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(5th stanza) :: sigh :: :: blush :: :: sigh, sigh :: peter pan's garden. perfect isn't it? And i would hold your hand and fall face first. no onlt off a fence, off a mountain. i'd make you fly because you make me fly and we could catch each other. painting essence of roses on lips, beautiful, crowns of jacaranda and gardenia :: sigh :: amazingly beautiful.
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(6th stanza) we can stay here forever. chasing the lost boys across lilly feilds, :: sigh :: those boys don't make us bleed. tinkerbells' story is so beautiful, sad and wonderful. clouds to ride on, can we eat them too? shoot, as long as your with me, my life is already good as gold!
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you are the most amazing person i've ever and will ever know too! I love you, and you're my faerie, my soul's other half, my voliet, my other wing! my everything! the glitter is my tinkerbell jar. you have no clue how much this poem means to me! i'm going to print it out and frame it on my wall, keep it with me forever. i loved this poem! brilliantly down, and i'm blushing as i write this.
:: love and a million faerie hugs ::
jerusha

this is beautiful

Beautiful poem, lots of good imagery here. Kind of mystical, which I like. ' tracing bitten fingernails over my skin
aching for the comfort i thought only sadness could bring.' is especially poigant. A balanced combination of sadness and beauty. well done
luv kt x