Reviews for A hope for peace part3
C. Faith Carpentieri chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Wow! That was amazing. I have asked myself those same questions many times.

I am disappointed to see there has been no real activity or new things posted in five years on your page.

What happened?

Courtney
keely aimee chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
wow. it's been a long time. i miss your work.

aprilthursday
YourAngelStandingBy chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Absolutely brilliant.

-Angel
Arcania chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
WOW! This is awesome. You said something that no one wants to hear, and shoved it down the throat of the one in power. I loved it!
A Hopeless Justification chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
As good as far as it goes, I noticed the rhyme scheme (i noticed from skimming over other poems you do that alot) good temp. theme... I was thinking it was a bit submissive, but it makes sense, I'm actually a bit burned out on the subject(entirely my problem) I thought it was good, thoughtful and such. good job.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
very pwoerful and true.. maybe oput them as separate chapters of one story?
lalamushu chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Wow, very in your face. I really like your rhyming scheme. It's so addicting. Well done.