Reviews for A hope for peace part3 |
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![]() ![]() Wow! That was amazing. I have asked myself those same questions many times. I am disappointed to see there has been no real activity or new things posted in five years on your page. What happened? Courtney |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. it's been a long time. i miss your work. aprilthursday |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely brilliant. -Angel |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! This is awesome. You said something that no one wants to hear, and shoved it down the throat of the one in power. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() As good as far as it goes, I noticed the rhyme scheme (i noticed from skimming over other poems you do that alot) good temp. theme... I was thinking it was a bit submissive, but it makes sense, I'm actually a bit burned out on the subject(entirely my problem) I thought it was good, thoughtful and such. good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very pwoerful and true.. maybe oput them as separate chapters of one story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, very in your face. I really like your rhyming scheme. It's so addicting. Well done. |