Reviews for Dont Do This
Kai Aquila chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
This is just what I was searching for today, thank you so much.
in theory chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
"I'll think about youThose words you saidYour heart is my templeMy temple is red" I love that part! nice work. Thnks for reviewing my stuff :)
AllyCred chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
liked it. but abit fuzzy at the end, My temple is red does that have anthing to do with your heart.
Manju chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
nice poem. i like it all except for the end-
"your heart is my temple
my temple is red".
it's unclear and unique. plz r&r my poems. i'd really appreciate that.