Reviews for Beach or Water
Leo Eigenmann chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
This is a beautiful comparison. I would call this a masterpiece.
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
wat a sad end! i h8 war! well written
catseyeview chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
another wonderful poem, imagery is beautiful in the beginning, you can be on the beach with the couple, almost become one of them, adds to the philosophy which I see is against war, death, in this way. The great imagery lends to the sadness, necessary to this piece to get your point across. Beautiful writing, I am sorry not to catch these poems sooner. Keep writing on these topics, you do it well, another to my fav. story list.
Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
wow that's extremely powerful... if its based on a real experience thats so sad...
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
ah im sorry it takes me so long to review back. my inbox is having a heart attack right now... lol... so many uploads! lol! anyhoo, im getting there now! and i want to say: wow amazing poem! :D
Mourning For Death chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
i hope to God that story is not true...if it is oh my God im so sorry...and it's nice...i like it...felt like u meant it
yes i would like to know how to separate things into stanza's and such...thanks you can IM me on Mourning2488
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Aw. The description of when you were at the beach and in your own worlds was really beautiful and romantic. But the ending was sad. aw.