Reviews for Summer Break Swagger
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Nah I think this one's my favorite lol "leaving me shaking, shaking my dear" I like that line. I like how you put your material so bluntly. ) You're a nifty guy. *smiles*
Jenna xoxo
TJ Henri chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
Woah. And I was expecting something swaggery. Although "You leave me drawn, you leave me pale/You leave me here to tell my tale" sounds a little trite, the rest of the poem is sweet. "Dear God, what would angels care? I'm sorting this one out alone." Great ending, smashing home the aloneness of times out of touch and no-one hearing the ringing in your ears. A lovely way of describing a cruel world - I think I might check out this Joy Division and the Libertines. If they inspire this kind of work, they must be badass.
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
wowowowow wow!
the last verse just hit me hard! it's perfect!
review me if you're free!
summerdazed