Reviews for Heartbreaker
dillpickleem21 chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
sigh...i love this poem so much. it's beautifully written and yes, i must admit sarcasm ROCKS! ask anyone who knows me...i'm the sarcastic queen! love this! keep writing poems!
SleepDontWeep chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
i love 'are your emotions real? u really dont have to stare'
u have a magnificent way with ur words! wow! i only wish my poetry came out half as gud! anyways much love and admiration to u! wud u mind checkin out my story 'thoughts of eva'! it wud mean so much to me! tanx xx
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
wow... awesome! This could be a great song if you had one verse as a chorus or something. really well done!
CydCharisse chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
Good work. I liked the part about 'rubbing salt into your wounds.' Yeah, I'm cool like that. _
Write on!
tripletxtreme chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
This is some good stuff! The rhyming element is soo good, and its so captivating, the story is so real. I love the neding especially! I like this.
nesy chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Very powerful, I liked it.I can relate to it somehow.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
i do so love sarcasm... lol.. nice job and cool rhyming
Seaspray chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
It's true, it takes two people to break up a relationship- the person the poem is addressed to seems to have a rather one sided view of things. Well written, very rhythmic. Nice.