Reviews for Frgaments
xhaiiro chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
This is so touching, I love it.
c0nquestri0n chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Wonderful poem... I kinda can relate to it... with 2 sides. nicely done.
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
I liked the two voices talking to each other. They seemed to say the same thing though. Maybe you can write one where the consciousness is contradicting her mind or heart. Something like that, but so that the girl and thoughts can have separate identities and it's easy to know who's talking! *Great job though on this one!
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
liked it...found it cute