Reviews for English Adventure
treshcapital chapter 21 . 9/30/2016
so i had some complaints about the first half of the story but by chapter 13 i was like "this mf have a stroke or some shit, nigga?" Like when you started tslking about all these completely unrealistic bitches hopping on Gary BWC? and the politically incorrect insults and shit, fam? You feel me? Like when you was calling lightskin niggas "crackers" cuz they talkin funny? Girl bye. This story had potential but something happened around chapter 13 that made you completely brain damaged. The fuck outta here fool. Nigga.
treshcapital chapter 11 . 9/29/2016
the anti-white comments were a bit unnecessary :I otherwise good chapter
Guest chapter 17 . 7/2/2015
Gary pisses me off.
vanessajhicks chapter 21 . 6/7/2015
EyesLs chapter 12 . 5/6/2015
Guest chapter 10 . 10/26/2014
One thing, I really like your story so far, but you can't just translate shithead into Scheißekopf. (Scheißkopf would be grammatically correct, but we don't use that term anyway) It sounds very weird to a native German. Just use this as future reference to do better research. ;) off to reading further! Whatever happens to Tommy at the moment seems interesting.
Some Guy in Cali chapter 21 . 6/17/2014
Idk how to get to fan art... Cry :_(
Some Guy in Cali chapter 21 . 6/17/2014
OMG! Post the next chapter right now! I just stayed up ALL night (8 in the morning now) reading your story and oh my god, it's awesome! A little less Gary and a little more Adam and E- I mean Adam and Tommy, please! ;P
Waitin4moar chapter 21 . 3/28/2013
Dude...dude... Please tell me that you are going to continue. I'm loving this story too much. -tear-
Well despite the fact that its 2013 and you've stopped this like...years ago. I really want to continue it. I'm a gay teenager and I have a crush on my best friend who's straight. (Korean drama much)
This story actually inspired me that there may be hope. I really like the characters, the plot, the twists and turns, everything. I guess I'll just pretend what happens next and that Adam and Tommy have hot sweaty passionate sex. -sigh-
Hopefully you'll continue one day. Thanks for everything!
The Maiden Moon chapter 21 . 10/13/2012
(My stupid computer won't let me log on) I love this story! Like soooooooo much! It's cute and funny and just yay! Lol, anyway yeah. Love the story and love u! :D
Mr-WannaBe chapter 21 . 7/25/2012
I love the story :D
But the Gary and Ashley part makes me sick...
You didn't have to go and did that to her...
Oh well, I like how the Tommy/Adam is progressing and you messed up their names sometime
For the Fan Art if someone had done it please post a link for the next chapter xD
I'd love to see it
Klalista chapter 21 . 3/25/2012
Not sure if troll or if serious when it comes to the female/male sex scenes... but they sound so hot. I'm eagerly waiting for more drama!
twibbit chapter 21 . 3/15/2012
Hope you update soon! This is an interesting story :)
ALittleLunatic chapter 11 . 2/6/2012
I almost had an asthma attack from laughing at what Tommy said!
Max R chapter 21 . 10/5/2011
Love! XD This story is sooooo amazing! I cannot wait for more chapters!

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