Reviews for English Adventure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great job! This is such an excellent fic. And I know I feel bad for Adam, the way he's being treated, but you've shown us Tommy's POV so perfectly as well. I feel sorry for the poor guy in some ways. Moreso for Adam, but Tommy seems to be trying. He needs a touch of a swift kick for the way he's bowing to Gary, but he's so conflicted too. Not that I agree with his reasoning, but you're showing his inner turmoil well. Wonderfully done :) I can't wait to see more. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() In the UK it's really only Jewish guys who get circumcised because of the whole religious thing. No one really seems to understand why they do it so much in the US. Is there any particular reason for it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah how the tables have turned! At first I felt a sort of 'serve you right' towards Tommy, but now I feel really sorry for him. Maybe Adam can be nice again and make him feel better? hehe. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that can't be good. I feel bad for Tommy...it was so SAD when he cried himself to sleep...but then, I feel bad for Adam too...Tommy should be helping him, should be all nice like he was before...Gary is EVIL! (AND stupid!) lol, wonderful update, I can't WAIT for more! |
![]() ![]() I can't believe it! That was THE worst possible way for Gary (and a good quarter of the ship's inhabitants) to find out his orientation. Tommy needs to grow a flippin backbone, though! I like that he shows his vulnerability to Adam and Adam alone, but the fact that he can't say anything to Gary? Not cool. He would've avoided that whole thing if he just would've said no. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no poor Tommy! I found this chapter really really good. The way Adam is towards Tommy was really a good thing for the chapter because I think it'll make Tommy realize he shouldn't care what Gary thinks. I'm glad Marcus helped Stanley out with the trip that was nice of him. Keep up the good work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter! I don't like Gary at all! And Adam and Tommy are fighting... That's sad... I hope things will get better for them! I like Marcus and Stanley! Tehy are so cute together! Please update soon!_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw poor tommy and adam having to deal with gary's rudeness and all. hopefuly things will get better and i love this story its great _ |
![]() ![]() Wow that ending was great I hope you updated this story or make a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I wasn't expecting that, it was a big twist. I'm intrested to know what Tommy's gonna do now, is he gonna stick up for Adam or fall into old habits? I'm guessing the latter and then after upsetting Adam the former well, I hope so anyway. They're such a cute couple |
![]() ![]() ![]() Clifhangers are very very bad, what is going to happen now? Man oh man I hate suspence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ I love you and your story! must watch, fav, and fav story you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh God, what an ending! I hope you will update this! I wanna know what happens!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! So sweet! Hmm... Who are Marcus going to end up with? Stanley? Or maybe that Leslie...?:) |