i can't believe how sweet and romantic the parts with tommy, adam, marcus and stanley can be compared to Gary and his one night stands. Its like those parts are written by completely different people.

i like this story though. please update soon.

Yeah this is really good, generally. Tommy and Adam's relationship seems very lifelike and well-developed, same with Marcus and Stanley. I actually skipped some, just 'cause my attention span isn't long. I'm not sure about the scenes with Gary though, they seem really trashy and unreal, which kind of takes of away from the story. Like the scene with the maids was getting to be just cheap porno. Anyways, the rest is awesome and keep it up. Cheers.

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Dude, I like your story and all, it's actually really good and sweet... but I'm kinda wondering why all the girls in your story are either stupid, ignorant, racist, annoying, retarded and/or bitches. I mean, yeah you like guys but don't you have any girls that are your friends at all? Is really bad how you stereotype them so horribly, almost makes it seem like you just hate girls. And if you do...then nvm. Cool story.

I can't do this story justice with whatever words I use to describe it but I just want to say that it is wonderful and simply awesome to read. It reminds me of why I love reading obsessively.

can't wait for more.

Great story, Update soon!

This story is quite enjoyable. Though the Gary het scenes are profoundly 'lolwut' on several levels that have nothing to do with them being het.

I've been meaning to read this for awhile anow I've finnaly got around to it and I LOVE IT! Ts is a very fantastic story! I love Stanley, Tommy, Marcus, and Adam. Great characters. I was wondering, do you get the ideas for some of the names from Harry Potter? If so AWSOME! Harry Potter is like the best books in the world in my opinion but I'm obsessed. I can't wait for more of this stoy and I hope that it doesn't take months. *hint*

First, a few comments: I hate Lynn cuz she's racist and retarted, Gary is a perv and I hate all of these chapters where he messes around with girls, and ADAM IS SO FRIGGEN ADORABLE! So's Tommy, hehehe! Well, I have drawn fanfiction, but I dont have a scanner or anything to upload it, so SORRY! This is so very amusing, and I hope to read more. And before I go, did I mention that Gary was a disgustiong perv and that I hated him? Cuz I really hope I get this point across. Stupid, close minded, insensitive, sex-crazed JERK!

Ok so I've followed this story and read it because i was drawn to it by your video on you tube. I know its horrible that i didn't ever review even once. I didn't think i should because i didn't have an account. Now i have one and i'm going to put up some stories that you have helped to inspire.

I really love this story. I think the relationship between Adam and Tommy is incredibly realistic.

You haven't updated in a while and that makes me so sad... :[

Please do update soon!

-Diana

haha, this story is absolutely wonderful, if not a bit horrifying.

Hope you update soon!

LOL this chaptter was really funny P!

Lol i loved this oneXD!

omg i like this storey it's really cute XD!

Jesus. Gary's sex scenes are absolutely ridiculous haha, where the fuck did you come up with them?

Oh, and I commend your way with words, the comebacks are hilarious :P seriously, this story is so different from the others here. Really funny.

Oh, and Stanley's name. I love it! But the thing with the name Bucket is...it could look posh, right? Buckett haha

Great story, but seriously. Gary's sex scenes made me cringe.