Reviews for The Train Alone
Dark Mage Raistlin chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
I love the rhythm in the first two stanzas-in fact, all the way through; it's a bit disorienting to go from the five-line, steady-beat format to the looser four/five line stanzas towards the end, but I really like this.
Rigalphantisi911 chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
It's very sad and makes you think. Everyone, everything, has a story to tell... especially the elderly. and old buildings...
my-vision chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
this is awesome and so inspirational! it makes me want to sit alone and think, but to make sure i have someone watching my back just in case... i don't know haha do you understand me? awesome job! i'm glad you're writing again! :-D