|Reviews for Hourglass|
| Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
the time spinning backwards sort of reminds me of someone's life flashing in front of their eyes.
since ur grammars conventional, I'd say ur lacking punctuation.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
nice message and totally true I really like the beginning similie