Reviews for El Hombre Afilado
Anya Tempest chapter 3 . 12/19/2005
Again - this was nice, but still as blunt as a large brick. D

No worries. I thought that the writing style is improving gradually as it goes on.
Aedyn Star chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
thats interesting. i like your title. The man something, what does afilado mean?