|Reviews for One Day|
| Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Very well written i have to say. I think you accomplished everything and much more on this piece. I actually scrolled down on your h.p to see if there were any poems of yours that werent reviewed, there werent. congrates. your a great poetess.
parentheses in eternity
| MacNWoody chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
I like the poem. without the punctuation makes it a bit confusing though. its like one thought doesn't end and goes into a totally different direction.
otherwise, this is a very powerful piece of work. two thumbs up!
| Mayhem6779 chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
It only gets better in the stories. Life on the other hand is doomed to die. Painfully, and miserably... There is no PEACE only PIECE-