|Reviews for The Rift|
| Lady Jedi chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Whoah... deep man. Let me guess, the droves were people conforming to what they saw, and thus dropping to their deaths in the rift, Why can't I have such deep dreams like that (lucky jerk) ;) Anywayz good job, well written
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
that's an interesting dream.. very nice descriptions.. one line didnt makes sense
Droves unknowingly marched to their deaths... maybe you meant doves?
| Laxbaby0905 chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Very good, and deep...ahh!
| Pathy chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
You have interesting, poetic dreams. . I'm jealous. I just dream about working in fields of Mr. Noodle... o.O (Ramen noodles, in case you're wondering!)
| Tipped chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Amazing. Freaky dream tho...