Reviews for Smile, Smile: A Lullabye
firehair-222 chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
aww, i wish it was always that easy to smile. i like the format. good job
-firehair
Pathy chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
The Nymph's Reply to the Shepherd:
Sometimes there is room for tears,
And sometimes one cannot smile;
You cannot always calm my fears,
Not even for a short while.
Will you be able to stand beside me
When I can do nothing but frown?
Will you be there knowing you cannot be
The thing that gets me up from down?
You cannot be my all, my everything...
And there is no way I can be yours.
People need so much more than one thing
For pure happiness to be secure.
CaramelCream chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Short and sweet. That was a great lullabye and very well written. Good work. keep it up.
*CaramelCream*
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Thats sweet, a genuine moto to be followed. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.