|Reviews for One Day You'll Leave|
| MIY23 chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
I understand the way you feel. And it doesn't have to be because I felt it. Its because you explained it so well!
Your writing is excellent!
I just loved this one!
I would just like to say something little.. I felt there were some rhymes, then it turned into a story, and went back. I think it is better to stay one way.