Reviews for little earthquake
feverdog chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
beautiful. it amazes me that someone your age could write such beautiful things! the title is great! and if i wanted to complain, which i don't because i love this, i would point out that it's a run on sentence :: Goofy smile :: but poetry is a run on sentence and it's beautiful! i loved it, it's beautiful, gritty raw. something that the girl in the poem (the one it talks about) would prolly feel like crying and like salt was pouring into her open wounds and being stuck between calling up the narrartor or hating them. (i think she would call her/him) where does your mind create these things? ...err... more of HOW does your mind create these beautiful things? (am i blabbering :: shrugs::)
:: love and faerie hugs::
jerusha
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
so very bittersweet. you captured this moment, these feelings so personally. you made me feel exactly what this person was feeling. i love that.
this is britt chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
really kind of heartbreaking. it's so stark, the imagery's so raw!
oh god i fucking loved her if only for myself...
that's brilliant. this whole poem was brilliant, madly brilliant!