Reviews for Dont Cry
Raya Dronaile chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
oh god that was so very VERY sad, i absolutely loved it. every line was beautiful, i have no exact phrase except "we can kiss forever", "dance into the morning" and then you added right at the end sich a beautiful, pleaing line, "Just, please,please don't cry." Such a very good poem, it was so beautiful. that is going into my fav's, it was so well written, and so emotional. great job!
ChristophersGoddess chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
yes, it is very sad. i love the line "I'll hold you close/and we can kiss forever" .. great job!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
:(AW so sad! its very good though.