Reviews for Coffee Shop
123456DoesNotExist chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
I love your stories!

It's a good thing you have so many of them!

But their sad!

*runs to get box of kleenex*
butterflyofhazeleyes chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
It sounds more like you could change it into a song if you really wanted to. I really suck at reviewing because I don't really see fault in anyone's feelings expressed. I can however, tell you if there's anything that could be worded better or if punctuation could be used. In your case, the second line sounds funny "with a flowers", "that looked like it was made for him" also could use some work, "the thre years of are togetherness", etc. just revise it a little. I really like these ideas portrayed in this though. Sorry if I've bummed you out in any way, but constructive criticism is the only way to go.

Butterfly
madison-diane chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
Wow, sad ending but I like it.