Reviews for Can't Stop the Rain
behind the velvet curtain chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
I like it. It's so true...
One suggestion... I think it might have a slightly stronger impact if you said "Can't stop the pain" before "Can't stop the rain"... just my opinion, it's quite good the way it is.
Keep writing :)
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
i like the repitition in this one.
u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
*gasps* i think that has to be one of my favourite poems that u have written. I really like the rhyming scheme and the words you used, you always pick the best phrases that fit the situation perfectly. Great!
IHJ chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
Though after a while the repeating stanza starts to get a little tiresome and I skim through it, not reading it fully, the other verses are well-written and I commend on your ability to make the rhyming seem natural. "I'm am your love, your liebling" You repeated "am" twice. Is liebling 'darling' in another language?
Izzy J.
bayshel-wass chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Wow...very powerful, between the repetition and the rhyming.