Reviews for Free Choice
bayshel-wass chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
Great poem. I especially liked the opening lines "A two-edged sword/the choice of man" and the end choice that you'd rather take yourself and your flaws, hard as it sometimes is...
vintage fade chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
Oh, that hit a nerve. Esepcially the lines 'I'll take me and all my flaws,/ For what better is there to be/ Than me?' I'd like to do just that, but it's too frustrating. Good poem, over all. You tell of something that everyone seems to fight over, but you don't really take sides. I like the rhymes too... Nice poem. Good job.
much love
Vintage Fade