|Reviews for Erased|
| tawnyfawn chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
*mocks and laughs at*
Nah, not really. As angsty as it was, it was still really good. And it wasn't too over the top, just angsty enough. I actually really liked it. The whole theme and everyhting. I thought the 2.5 kids line was classic. Anyway, well done. I can't really think of how you could improve it!