Reviews for The Evil On Top
Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
Short, yet to the point. I like it.
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
I really like this, especially the ending. That is so true with politicians By the way thanks for the reviews on my poems. But you keep up the great work on your poems. TTFN.
Princess of Darkness 72 chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
It needs to be longer and more detailed, u really cant understand what you're trying to say.
Tree of Victory chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
It was very good, only a little repetitive. Besides that, I think you could go somewhere with it.
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
it would have been even better if this was longer. i love politician-abuse!
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
Seems pretty vauge. For a piece with so much potential, I would have expected details supporting your argument/opinion for this; or just explaining why you felt like this (to a greater depth). Keep writing!
Ovaia Pelosa chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
good. i like it.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
wow, short, but to the point
great job on this!