Reviews for In a dream
Munchin chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
WOW. this is really good. I like the "twisting tempest in my heart" that is really cool. I like it alot. Againa I found a few lines that poked out and somewhat poke your flow. I like you flow it is sweet and slow and that is pretty(well in my opinion anyways.) So yeah I think it is really good!
Manju chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
this is my second fave of your poems. great job yet again. i like the flow of it-short but full of shown and some hidden meaning.
Serfious chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
This is a great poem. Keep up the good work (so sue me for not being creative. I just spent the day working on Calculus ;P)
EWindheim chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
I like the similies in this poem, it makes the reader feel more of what you are trying to say. Nice job!
~Hawke