Reviews for The Mistake
MackenzieElizabeth97 chapter 5 . 3/2/2011
um theres nothing here but on hold?
Sexy Vampire Princess chapter 5 . 12/12/2006
NO!

I was so looking forward to the next chapter. (cries) update soon please
Tenshistar chapter 5 . 4/22/2005
Oh, i hope your computer is fixed and that you will update soon. Its really good.
KELLY4SVS chapter 3 . 3/25/2005
you seem fond of the name gabriel...sounds good so far was sniffing her butt part of getting into her good books? few typos but not noticable really..
Claws-of-Passion chapter 2 . 12/17/2004
You have interesting ideas. However I read blood and chocolate years ago and loved it. It seem s as if you are useing large chunks of it when I am sure you can easily stand on your own two paws. Do me a favour try palying a bit of Werewolf the Apocolypse, or WOD Werewolf when it comes out. Create your own ideas. You are good I see great potential, if you want advice drop me a line I know enough about werewolves and shapeshifters to be one. Keep up the great work I look forward to seeing future writing from you.
srovertron chapter 4 . 12/10/2004
this is awesome, i really look forward to future chapters please update soon
Adders721 chapter 3 . 11/11/2004
I like this one too! I loved Blood and Chocolate! Can't wait for more!
~adders~
Aelita chapter 3 . 10/21/2004
MROW! I love this story to! *glomp* hehehehe
Moonlight Silver Wolf chapter 2 . 9/20/2004
Good chapter, you may want to watch you spelling mistakes though. Like the word quart instead of court. Also slow things down. Describe the transformation in more detail give the readers a visual of what is going on. it will help your story greatly.
Moonlight Silver Wolf chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
This sounds a lot like Blood and Chocolate by Anette Curtis klaus. have you ever read that? its a good book. The basis for this story is good but you may want to slow things down and give more explanations for things.