Reviews for Ouch
Aquilarealm chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
I think it makes more sense if you read it the second time out loud, following each word and emphasizing it where you see exclamation marks etc. Nice-it was different.
ylem chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
It's like those exercises in drama wher you say the same thing over & over but with different intonations each time. Classy.
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
baha. pretty echoes.
echoes bring out
the shadows of poems,
but vividly.
you've mastered that.
and the author's note
is a work in its own.
thank you!
Person chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
What a writer only can appreciate with the smallest differences birthing the greatest variances. Quite interesting.
Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
It's weird, and I don't get it, but it's amusing.
The Juggler 42 chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
This one's a bit hard to appraise, being that the only varience is spacing and punctuation. I didnt know that touch-me-nots where so dynamic. I'd like to hear a reading of this one.
R&R my stuff sometime, if you wish.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/8/2004