|Reviews for No More!|
| Lancealot chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
I like the way that you only let a few words be in each sentence. It makes one pause and think. Keep it up and hope to read more of your work!
| abs1247 chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
that was very powerful. i love your work that i've read so far. you're a great writer. thank you for reviweing my poems. i appreciate it. in my spare time i'll review plenty of yours in return.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
That was really intense...kind of creepy, but I liked the description.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
wow.. amazing use of language... awesome job ::adds to favs::
| Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
Chilling imagry and detail that pierces you right to your very soul. I honestly felt like I was part of it all. Wonderful writing, even though it's chilling.
| Oath chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
This is once again an amazing poem and i just love your style. But one thing:
for the dead ones
and my own skin dieing
The word, dieing didn;t fit for me, idk.. it didn't flow that one part, maybe i diff. word?
| tabiboi chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
Oh my God! This was wonderful. I am so close to crying.. It was like I was right there. It really makes me think about all the rapes that happen everyday that we never know about. Keep writing!
| Akaiyume chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
Wow, it's a bit too long to my taste, but I know I make long poems too. Anyway I thought it was a very good poem, keep it up,
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
Outstanding poem. So full of raw emotion and so very well conceived.
Exceptional, there is no other word that suitably describes the words you have conveyed here.
| Clear-Water-Jem chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
Hey I love it!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
My dear Juliet-what can I say to that. -m-
p.s I’m (too) young to be old.
| Jina-chan chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
That was so good. O_o; It kicked the crap out of my poetry. I think you should really keep it up.
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
wow. that was so sad. I really like the way you started this, but toward the middle, it kind of felt like you were rambling. But you pulled it together in the end. good job.
| kezya chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
Oh, a difficult subject, but you dealt with it splendidly.
"my bones curl" - I love that phraze. And many others. You have a gift with words.