|Reviews for The Black Butterfly|
| psychotically obsessed chapter 3 . 9/11/2004
okay, i've finished reading it so far. So please review. the bad guys point of view was good. i always find them just as, if not more so, interesting as the good guys. For they have so much depth and character buried in them. They are the characters we will never truly understand and therefore are intrigued by. The story line is good, and i liked it. The plots for revenge, the bad guys being too evil to be killed by a mere man. I don't understand that because the bad guys don't seem that evil, they still seem human. Other than that it was good, please continue.
| psychotically obsessed chapter 2 . 9/11/2004
Death, sounds so painful, and this is for the person still alive. For Orion's pain will be greater than Lilli's. Okay, now i'll be normal, although that is quite impossible. Please continue, well i'll continue reading to the end of what you have written, then request you continue shall i. But so far *thumbs up* very interesting.