Reviews for When the Autumn Wind Blows
makeshift parachute chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
I love it. It gives you a pecaful, natural feeling. An envisionment of the perfect autumn day. I love the description, great job. Oh, and by the way, thanks for the review.
Echo
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Ah, satori! Wondeful description of a fall day in the North. -m-
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
very nice imagery.. awesome poem
Amaya Windsong chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
i like this! though i'm sure i'd like it better if we hadn't lost the original. *waggles finger* lol. good job, and thanks for the review!
rikku
The Juggler 42 chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
A few suggestions:
Could the first line be "When the autumn wind blows"?
I liked that as the last line, the first is similar to it but I think if you used the same words it would sort of close the thought nicely.
One more thing, "Which allows me to" is awkward, and doesnt really add anything. Other than that, nice imagery.