Reviews for Indecision
Me chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
LOL; who is the other anonymous reviewer down here? Well, as it seems it wasn't me...But I think the person is right; I also thought you were done with that subject!Weird...and strange. But hey, I know you are able to handle it!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
I thought you decided a while back that You Are Not A Villain?
logical-unreason chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
Wonder if you notice I'm reviewing this now.
Good piece, again I say there isn't metaphor more of a description of what is going on. There are good off the cuff lines that sound particulary swish. Better then most of the lyrics from the bands on stage last night. Can you remember any of their lyrics? Nah.
I should probably put more effort into the review but there isn't that much to find fault in. A good solid addition to your ever growing batch of poems.
Keep writing and I'll keep on reading.