Reviews for Touch Of The Visceral Guilt
shea's surrender chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
I like the last stanza, the whole thing is nicely written, kinda disturbing in the first stanza though.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
I agree with the other reviewer honey, you might want to emphasis your points in the last two stanzas with more detail. I like the way this was presented though. Do you ever stop writing? *claws you and mauls you and hugs you* ) lol I'm silly.
Jenna xoxo
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
The opening phrase is a strong hook into the imagination. ┬┐Can you strengthen the second and third stanzas with more detail? -m-