|Reviews for Final|
| Louellena chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
for me it's actually been sort of opposite... maybe sort of up and don...
well - schoolwise anyway
| Cinnamon Zo chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
I like how well I can relate. I've caught myself several times wishing for those younger years when things were so simple...Great writing.
| Audrey Portman chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
yes, my life has resembled that at times. it's well written, i like it.
| u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
wow thats really good. I like the way the 2nd and 4th line of every stanza rhymed, and the sentences themselves were really strong and powerful. Well done