Reviews for If Only
lymli chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
wow, I'm not pregnant but i can relate to this, sometimes the pression's so hard, one always takes the easy way.
Sayora Miakaiede chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
i should remember this, it would help me...with my friend, if she turns like that.
alors chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
Tragic... and sorrowful...
In the last stanza, "If only she wasn't afraid to tell her parents" doesn't really seem to fit. A little too stiff, perhaps, or too long.
Maybe something that flows better would fit better?
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
oh, oh, oh... wow... ouch, good, wow... amazing!