|Reviews for No more the sword|
| keltica chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
I don't really care that much about wars as long as they don't harm Mother Nature, which is generally the case, meaning I must care :S ... your poem is powerful, a shout for peace amongst human treasons ...
keltica, the celtic fire from within
| Ahemait chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
oh! i luv it! the rhymes are alos very good and make sense (when i make rhyming poem, they don't make ANY sense! but this is good. i can also relate to it a lot! i hate the war! (even if this probably isn't related to that war, in ANY sense, but self does not care!)yes, byes!
| BranwenEithne chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
m emotional. I like it alot. A smidge creepy though but the point is well expressed. O dear I dislike war...
~ hehe I'm glad I finally know of someone who likes Enya and Clannad. Sadly no one my age does. If you go on the Enya site you can download a new song named Sumiregusa. It's amazing!
| ICU2 chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
short and nice, I liked the rhyming
| K. Evenstar chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
I agree. War will never end if we keep on fighting (it's obvious, but true.)
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
awesome! i loved the rhyming and the ending was great. it sounds like an old classic kind of poem. keep up the great work
| Starry Sweet87 chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
oo, me likey! Very good, I loved the flow and emphasis of it.