Wow you're really good at writing! I love the format of it, it's really clever, love the tragicomic kind of touch that was added, but at the same time the openness is great. Nice work :)

again, the ending and rhythm in this is so fantastic, i love this, especially "I won", it kind of shows how desperate people can get, and how bad their games are if this is what you have to do to win, have to add you to my faves :) x weasel within x

this is real deep and good, your talented. Its disturbing but in a good way . ...Alex...

this is a good poem, and i can relate to a lot you say in it.

oh! i love this poem! i can really relate to it. but the lining drove me insame -rips out hair- ah well! i can deal!

Really dark and moving poem, proving while ignorance is bliss for some, it is fatal for others. I adored the style, the fragmented sentences. Keep Writing!

Good example of what happens when people don't listen.

A little choppy but I relaly like it

Wow, I like it. Lots. Thanks for the review of The 'Suicide Of A Sister'.
~*~Racheal~*~

Well, you reviewed some of my poems so I'll return the favor. . Let's see, I like this poem, especially the very simple/basic pars such as "I cut/ Myself/ Last night." and "I hate/ Myself./ You know/ This, Oh!" They give the poem its feeling and make the reader think each thought separately. However, transitioning suddenly from one or two syllables to four or five disrupts the pattern. Try easing into more syllables and easing back out. Just suggestions.

Reaaly dark. I especially liked the ending. The styles lineation isn't it?

This is... scary. I always get moved by suicidal poems, but I'm not a huge fan of them. Good work.
Stones decay, words last
Nick

I liked the ending, with the bang, bang. very good!
*I love your penname!