|Reviews for Just Dance|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
To hold in motion,
Close—Swaying to a rhymth,—
Hard & soft & both.
In a tantric dance,
Mesmerizing movements rife,—
I could live a life.
When you brush your breasts,
Soft as feathers 'cross my chest,—
* * * * * * * * * *
Fingers entwine mine,
Sensations of you. —m—
| myno chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
gorgeous poem, i really like it.
| alors chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
...ohh. nice, dreamlike quality to this one... it's sweet. beautifully captured the feeling, i think. keep writing
| Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
I thought this was cool how there were two people dancing instead of just one, it was something difference. it was lovely and magical- sorry I haven't reviewed nething lately, very busy! will review more later, i promise. thanx for ur patience, stay awesome and *write on*
| Violet Blues chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
ah nice nice, dancing ;)