Reviews for Just Dance
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
To hold in motion,

Close—Swaying to a rhymth,—

Hard & soft & both.


In a tantric dance,

Mesmerizing movements rife,—

I could live a life.


When you brush your breasts,

Soft as feathers 'cross my chest,—

Dancing ecstacy.

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Fingers entwine mine,

Intoxicating whirls—wine,—

Sensations of you. —m—
myno chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
gorgeous poem, i really like it.
alors chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
...ohh. nice, dreamlike quality to this one... it's sweet. beautifully captured the feeling, i think. keep writing
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
I thought this was cool how there were two people dancing instead of just one, it was something difference. it was lovely and magical- sorry I haven't reviewed nething lately, very busy! will review more later, i promise. thanx for ur patience, stay awesome and *write on*
Violet Blues chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
*sigh* Beautiful.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
ah nice nice, dancing ;)