Reviews for The wounded girl inside of me
Serene Waters chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
Wow. That was excellent! The rhyme was very smooth, and unforced. The phrase
"Wounded Hand" has a very soothing, yearning need to it. Awesome!
~Serene Waters
Oath chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
I presume The wounded hand is God comforting you? Great poem, and it does give off the feeling of being embraced. i like the part: restoration ripens –
i am pookie chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
I love it.
Whitesiren chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
Oh beautiful...
Oh Wounded Hand, stroke tenderly
the wounded girl inside of me.
Beautiful lines... I love the flow, the plea (-ing) message of the poem...
Eowyn29 chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
Ich denke, dieses Gedicht ist wirklich tolls! Du schaffst eine wunderbare düstere Athmosphäre. Auf jeden aFall ein Werk, das man nicht s schnell vergisst.
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
Very beautiful piece, indeed. It brought the stinging to my eyes, but as explained in 'Death's Kiss', I cannot cry even if I wanted to.
Just to let you know, if you've read the email I sent or not, I wrote a poem for you. Though I know you may not be able to trust a Human as you trust in your God, I wrote it anyway, for I think you'll know that I am sincere in every word.
Ivriniel chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
Great images!
Myriah chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
Oh wow, this was gorgeous! He is amazing. . .
You did a great job here, keep using your gift for him, you're inspiring!
kdatlyno chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
All I can say is... wow.
Straight from the heart. Powerful, and emotional. You did a heck of a good job with this one.
656 chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
Isnt it amazing how Christ can hold us. I can relate to this, though I wasnt abused. I know you know what I mean..
70 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5