|Reviews for Letter To My Mom|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
Dear Simpleplan 13: Thx for your continuing reviews. It took me clicking about 20 of your poems to get to one I hadn't read yet. So here goes, ...
They left without me being ready yet,
With a dark coachmen that came in late night,
¿Why is it that midnight seems to draw souls,
To embark journeys without readiness?
They left without too many words unsaid,
We'd talked so much about so many things,
Knowing full well that any moment's breath,
Could be the severing of life's thin chord;
They left without those things they used each day,
Knick-knacks and trivialities well worn,
In hands arthritis had deformed and bent,
But still created and molded with tools;
They left to some emptiness far beyond,
At least that's what my heart still says to me,
That past clear ether in some nether world,
Elysian with grey they beckon me;
For They left so much treasure in my heart,
That in their memory I still rejoice,
When thinking on their patience and kindness,—
A fire embedded in a hearth of warmth.
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
very sad and yet intense. i'm sure that God has a plan for all of you. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| Caliber bitchez chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
very nice and yet sad...yea anyway nice poem please keep writing
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
aw...this is so sweet...
i'm adding this to my favies, this is really really good. all your raw emotion flows off each line, nd the last line really choked me...
i have to say, this is poem is absolutley spellbinding, but that really doesn't matter, does it?
my love to you,~kerr~
| Poetrybay chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
i like this, this is very good
| IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
That is so sad! It made me want to cry! Good job!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
ah wow... thatd suck... (the situation). the poems good!
| Violet Blues chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
That was touching.