Reviews for Blood On Our Sneakers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hello i am your new stalker or your first stalker. That would depend on whether or not you have been stalked before. Basically, in claire language, that means i llove your story. T'will be added to my favourites! (and i am going to try and bleach my eyes...well, maybe not, but i'm sure my friends will be impressed at the suggestion. Because they like eating tisses when they are drunk. And snorting listerine when they are not.) add more chapters soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahahahah this is the best! I love Smith Smith and Holden is just plain cute! She should go with him, he's just so freaking sweet! In a drunk-hung-over-messed-up way. Hey, that's always the best... anyway, really good work and update soon! |
![]() ![]() Very spiff, but you know, I think Jacklyn should give Galileo a chance. Have to support the underdog... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, Jacklyn is realy amusing. She's like...antieveryone, but then yeah. I'm not sure where youre going with this story yet, which is good, because I had predictible stuff. . Farewell and keep writing! -Cathy- |
![]() ![]() Smith is so cute when he's awkward! I really like your chapter titles too. I know that doesn't have much to do with the story, but oh well. Write more soon! |
![]() ![]() I love Jacklyn already! She has a different voice compared to most people's main characters. It's a nice change. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! You went to the trouble of reviewing my story Emo Boys Do Cry so I thought I'd repay the favour. So far I really love this piece, your heroine is actually very bright, witty and disrespectful, something I find rather refreshing. Please keep up the excellent work! Draven Valentine |