|Reviews for Puzzled Incomplete|
| PamWTKA chapter 3 . 4/30/2006
"But I didn’t care, he was, after all, my own secret, lost, and wounded dream." Whoa. That last line just killed me.
Seriously, awesomw work. I feel so special for inspiring something as great as this. Love.
| Unwritten Answers chapter 3 . 4/28/2006
very nice. i liked the phrase 'secret desires or lost wishes'.
| kirsten was chapter 3 . 4/27/2006
i love this. your writing is so beautiful and lyrical, and i love your analogies and descriptions. this is amazing.
| PamWTKA chapter 2 . 1/4/2006
Whoa whoa! Freaking awesome! I like the second chapter better. The band-aid comparison is really great... I had never thought about it. I just feel like writing right now...
| lilith's heir chapter 2 . 1/1/2006
whoa! you gotta keep this going, roll roll.
| Unwritten Answers chapter 2 . 12/23/2005
this is good too(: very meaningful and angsty. i like it.
| Unwritten Answers chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
this touched me a lot. very nice, very angsty and emotional. this is the first time i've seen the 'sense of completion' written in such a way and i must admit i like it.
| Nothing So Mundane chapter 2 . 12/22/2005
so sad, it made me think about... band aids jaja and I don't know, I am glad I've never suffered what she does, I'm glad we're always curable.
| Nothing So Mundane chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
*aw* this was cute, very poetic congratulations ,its great :D I am very in the mood for things like this right now you know? keep writing