|Reviews for Maybe|
| helpless-pretender chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
maybe...*shrug*...sometimes we wish to be over things and people, but it just doesnt work out..sad...good luck great job, keep writing
| Cool-Ruzz chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
'Was I like Britney?
Stronger Than Yesterday
Or was I like Justin?
Too tired to cry him a river.'
That was real funny, how you combined her feelings that he did not love her with funny thoughts. Keep writing! Do check out my work if you'd the time.
| sinner saint chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
Wow this is so nice. You describe the emotions in this poem so eloquently - I'm impressed. Keep on writing!
P.S. Thanks for your comment on "Faith". It's much appreciated.
| Shyanna chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Really cool. I love the way u incorperate certain songs.
| kristin chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
you never dedicate the poem 'maybe' to me..!
so sad lor..
i m also ur frenz and somemore classmates lor...
though ur poem doesn'trhyme, but i feel that it ispretty good and well writen overall..
Jia you k!
| rui chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
u nuts ah ma? wat was the last part abt me? which part am i? u crazy. u haf a crush on me or that other special someone? i think u're really bonkers. LOL! juz kidding. nice one though. yep.
| FrostedTeardrop chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
I don't know how to explain it, but I like this poem. It's different, in a good way of course. Never stop writing.