|Reviews for Bethrothed|
| herondalechick123 chapter 20 . 3/11
Love love loved this story.
| herondalechick123 chapter 1 . 3/11
Just from reading the first chapter, I have say that this set up reminds me of the beginning of the movie "Sissi," the Austrian empress whose sister was supposed to marry the emperor of Austria but he chose the younger sister instead. I love that movie and I think it's interesting that this snippet reminds me of that.
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/25/2014
This story is gods but Alexandra's character is not my favorite. She's always acting so childish yet she wants to get treated like and adult. She irks me and is annoying.
| jennielove chapter 20 . 3/3/2013
Wow! That was just amazing. I really loved it. Is there a sequel?
| nadeshiko567 chapter 20 . 5/3/2012
I like it...They were meant to be and they are a cute couple...
Wonderful story! Good job!
| crazypsycho chapter 20 . 4/26/2012
One of my favorites here! :D I would also say that you should be wary of your grammar. There are some sentences that I can understand despite the grammatical errors, but I still suggest that you try your best to use correct grammar.
| Angelbaby1991 chapter 20 . 1/4/2012
Great Story :)
| EverySilence chapter 20 . 9/25/2011
I think u should've acknowledged and given credit to the author and her book 'Rebel against Love'. It WAS her book that you borrowed some of the ideas from. You can't really say that this is ur OWN ORIGINAL story.
| EverySilence chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
So, this is a remake of the romance book called 'Rebel Against Love' eh? Not as detailed as the romance book but, the plot is basically the same idea. Locations have been changed, more characters added or dropped, etc. etc.
| psycho angel chapter 20 . 12/31/2009
Wow, this story was really good.
| Hiyorin chapter 11 . 8/24/2009
This is a great story, but the many grammar mistakes can really throw someone off. I read on your profile that english is your second language, so maybe think about getting a beta to look over your story for mistakes.
But anyways, great job! )
| iman1234 chapter 20 . 7/27/2009
this is realy good update soon
| Nadeshiko95 chapter 20 . 5/25/2009
WOW i was so looking for an arranged marriage story, and now i found it. But what's with her and black?
| valevalevale chapter 20 . 5/3/2009
I really love this story!
but there is one thing that keeps bugging me... shouldn't Alexandria be pregnant in the end?
cuz they didn't use protection...
| Hazelnut Romance chapter 20 . 12/10/2008