|Reviews for Bethrothed|
| candlelightwriter chapter 20 . 10/19/2004
great ending! it makes me so happy!
| Jen chapter 19 . 10/16/2004
Happy you updated. Is this story close to finishing?
| Desert Illusion chapter 19 . 10/15/2004
Aw. I'm glad that she confesses her love to him, and vise versa. UPDATE SOON!
| Limegreenqueen chapter 18 . 10/14/2004
Hola ! I 'm back i didn't even know that you had chapters were really great. I fell sorry 4 darius and both miis each other so much but i felt like you could have done a little more sadness in leaving from Alex( you know the bittersweet stuff bitterleaving him ,sweetbeing independent)i hope that they can figure this all out because jena is a bitch! but htey both really love each other so it has too unless you have something else up your selve.
thanks4 writng,karla aka limegreenqueen
| reviewer chapter 18 . 10/13/2004
gr8 story!upd8 soon
| Tsukinani chapter 18 . 10/13/2004
's a good story, update soon ne?
We Could Be Gone
| superflygirl4lyfe chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
great, faboulus, anymore words i can think of? hm...
| ChristinaMarie23 chapter 18 . 10/11/2004
i really like the story line so far, there are a lot of gramatical errors that you might want to watch out for but other than that it's great. keep it up!
| Shannon chapter 18 . 10/10/2004
Hi...i like this...you should write more. I think Darius and Alex love eachother. I am glad, that he got rid of Jenna. I didn't like her. Darius didn't like her for real, and Alex's sister was a bitch...I hate her also...update soon!
| RKRBirdgirl chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
O good chapter I look foward to more as normal! PLEASE update SOON! Wonderful story!
| Cassie chapter 18 . 10/8/2004
great story keep it up i love it
| Lavender-Drop chapter 18 . 10/7/2004
n-no! update! now! please! amabo! i love this story! i really do! go you and your great authormenship (now is a word found in dictionaries near you *finger thing and wink*) i love her relationship with Roman! I love Roman! god its funny! update! YAY
| wounded-by-you chapter 18 . 10/7/2004
i jus started reading you story i think its awsome i luv alex and feel sorry with her...plz update soon!
| Penny chapter 18 . 10/7/2004
Well this is very interesting...great story! I really like where this is going...I just dont want it to be to bad..i have an idea where this is going and well it could be one of many things. again good job!
| Emma chapter 18 . 10/7/2004
awesome! i love it.. cant wait to see all the drama unfold, when alex gets back to the vineyeard and has to deal with both Darius and her parents.. this story is amazing u rock!